Forward Motion for Writers

Changed my mind. I'm going to write TriPoint Station but I'll change that title. It's just too bland.

Just discharged from the Space Service after her last one year tour of duty on board the Space Cruiser Atlantis, Jolene (Jo) Harris has 24 hours leave on TriPoint Station before she signs onto her new ship, The Adirondack. She buys herself a trinket, a small jewel, before going into a bar recommended by her old sergeant, Sergeant Boyd. A few hours later, her lover is dead and she’s running for her life through the underworld of TriPoint Station. What’s so important about this jewel and will she live long enough to get to her new ship?